(WARNING: THIS IS COMPLETELY UNEDITED AND UNCENSORED I PLEA UNSANITY) please suffer through my mad ramblings
My mind forever wandersAnd brings my body alongWhen I no longer stirThe nightmares return just as strongIt's only when I close my eyesThat I see the bad thingsThey evoke my tortured criesAnd make my mind revoltingOh my dear please don't dienot after you've bled me drywithout you I'm numband my mind is struck dumbOh my dear please don't dieIt would crush me like a flyMy soul would follow youYou must know this to be trueOh my dear please don't dieand take your spirit to the skywithout you my heart will stopand my head will spin like a topOh my dear please don't cryeven if you were to dieI would have to follow youInto the earth or the wild blueI just came up with these so don't judge me too harshly. I like the font on the last one though light-hearted letters for dark subject matter
PS: This is the type of stuff I write and most of the time don't post
i like how the last four stanzas repeat the first line (except the fourth, but i like the variation of the theme) as odd as it sounds i think this may be my favorite poem you've posted.
Like I said I plea unsanity. I think I'm improving though, weird thought that