Finally Michael's Critically denounced poetry Volume 6 version 2
Log-a-Log
Slain by a Guosim rapier,
Without a chance to fight
Because you Fenno did fear,
He slew you out of spite
~Michael Kane
Nutwing
the second owl at Redwall
The first was your mother,
In your failing seasons you did fall
Slain by a Marlfox cur
~Michael Kane
Gruven
Father of a false Taggerung,
From a pole you were hung,
Slain by the Chieftain's throw,
You held your shield too low,
~Michael Kane
Sawney Rath
Chieftain of the Juska Rath
At home in a bloodbath,
With an amber handled knife
You caused Redwall much strife
~Michael Kane
Dansie
In the charge you did fall,
Against the warriors of the Savage
Despite the vermin's ravage
You are now safe in Redwall
~Michael Kane
Junty Cellarhog
Cellarhog of Redwall
By arrows you did fall,
We shall miss your brew
Almost as much as you
~Michael Kane
Brigadier Kremshaw
The old school Brigadier
Nothing you did fear
Stopping the vermin raid,
You killed many without a blade
~Michael Kane
Butty Wopscott
Corpral Butty Wopscott
The way of the warrior was your lot
Slain by the savage one's teeth
Now you lay in the heath
~Michael Kane
That's all your getting for now
PS: the common cold sucks more than my first gouda poem
Why me!!!!
Hey--this could be the start of a group poem.... <br> <br>Why me could be the first line....Just a thought <br>Mary Jean
Yeah I'll redo it but I'm working on six papers at the moment so it will be awhile